Editing 2

Looking back in class at what we re-shoot in the weekend we were pleasantly surprised by the quality of some of the shots, one of my favorites being Eve walking down the path blurry, camera focused in on a leaf. However we clearly still didn't manage to organize our time well as although we started filming early, our last shots of Rachael's Mum looking out the window are in the dark which completely ruins our continuity and confuses our narration. We have discussed ways of correcting this error by adapting the story-line so that Eve has gone missing and the Mother doesn't know where she is, thus the time change and to try and edit out the garden in some of the shots and to zoom in on just the Mum so the lighting change is less obvious. I hope our blunder does not damage our end result and i believe that the change in story could be an improvement as it adds to the audiences tension as they do not know where Eve has gone, especially as we are thinking of ending it with an extreme close up of Abigail's eyes with a darkened (via editing) background.